How to vary sentence length and rhythm
When every sentence runs about the same length, readers stop hearing emphasis. This guide shows how to vary length and openings so your important points land.
Why it matters
Varied sentence length helps readers hear emphasis. A short sentence after longer ones lands a point; a long one can carry a complex idea.
What you can do
Land the point with a short sentence
After two or three medium sentences, state the key point briefly.
Ask yourself: What is the point of this run of sentences? Could it land in a few words?
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BeforeThe team tested the design in three cities. Each test ran for a full month. The results were consistent across all sites.
AfterThe team tested the design in three cities, each for a full month. The results held everywhere.
Combine two closely related sentences
Join sentences that belong together into one longer sentence.
Ask yourself: Which two sentences belong together?
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BeforeThe library extended its hours. It also added weekend staff.
AfterThe library extended its hours and added weekend staff.
Vary how sentences open
Start some sentences with a time, a condition or a contrast instead of the subject.
Ask yourself: Read the first three words of each sentence. Do they all start the same way?
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BeforeThe plan began in May. The plan expanded in June. The plan ended in July.
AfterThe plan began in May. By June it had expanded, and in July it ended.
When to leave it as it is
The steady rhythm is deliberate, as in a list of parallel steps or a formal procedure.
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